2014年6月英語四級作文點評:campus(附范文)

　　2014年6月英語四級作文點評:campus(附范文)

　　【參考范文】

　　The Cherry Avenue

　　If I'm the guide of my foreign friend's visit to our campus, I will choose the Cherry Avenue as our first destination.

　　As the name implies, the Cherry Avenue is lined with hundreds of neatly-placed cherry blossom trees. It is about 200 meters long and a major scenic spot in our campus. In spring when the cherry trees bloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from a distance, it seems as if the road were surrounded by pink-hued clouds. Especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blossoms flutter and fall gently like a drizzle. Such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance.

　　What's more special is the buildings along the avenue. Built in early 1900s, they are now called "cherry blossom castle". They've witnessed the history of our school and even our country. You can learn a lot about our school there.

　　In a word, a tour to the Cherry Avenue is both an amazing sight-seeing and a great opportunity to know about the culture of our school.

　　【點評】

　　本次四級作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話題作文，可能讓準(zhǔn)備好圖片題寫作的同學(xué)有點措手不及。不過話題貼近生活，要求介紹大學(xué)校園的某個地方，即一篇介紹性的短文，難度不大，只要避免語法錯誤即可保證得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在詞匯的豐富性上下功夫，避免同樣的詞多次出現(xiàn)。

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