и俼Щ(x)?ˎҸֵĂ俼иԇʹҷP(gun)и(x)ĸ߷ּи_^ôиZԱ_עЩи˼·Θ(gu)҂һ
1и_^ô?
S^и˂һظXиһ^õ߷ֵĿһЩи(jng)˂(yng)@Щĵđ(yng)иu֘(bio)_^Y(ji)βҪ(bio)
(һ)P(gun)_^Ҫԣ
ԇ̎ܶHL(fng)L(fng)ܶͻȻһ죬Ůпfǧкf“ֻҊ!”֪˵һõRǶôҪһµݺ͟oYӡôŮҲֻܟoεf“ֻ‘v’”
иҲȻҸ˹pӛе_^“@õĕr@ĵĕr;@ǻ۵ĕr@ĕr;@ĕrڣ@Ǒɵĕr;@ǹļ(ji)@Ǻڰļ(ji);@ϣ֮@ʧ֮;˂ǰ˂ǰһo;˂ֱ˂ֱµتz҂?ni)ֱ෴ķ?-֮ǕrF(xin)ڷdzijЩ̵ę(qun)ԳҪ~fã;fҲġ”űȵĚҲc˕rcµıӢİ_^bp͌W(xu)(x)
It was thebest of times, it was the worst oftimes, it was the age of wisdom, it was theage of foolishness, it was the epochof belief, it was the epoch ofincredulity, it was the season of Light, it wasthe season of Darkness, it wasthe spring of hope, it was the winter of despair,we had everything before us,we had nothing before us, we were all going directto Heaven, we were all goingdirect the other way--in short, the period was sofar like the present period,that some of its noisiest authorities insisted onits being received, for goodor for evil, in the superlative degree ofcomparison only. ---- “A tale of twocities ”
CharlesDickens
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ҲS҂λͬW(xu)f҂ӢZҲS]ôи(jng)ͳֵĕrgȥ(gu)˼҂ԓôk?
и@ӵĘ(bio)ʻԇУ҂ҪĕrgȶҪһƪ_^frgҪC3-5֔(sh)ҪM60-80~ԌڻA(ch)^õČW(xu)f֮ǰһҪһ^õ˼·A(ch)^ͬW(xu)fҪкõ˼·߀ҪW(xu)(x)Щ^`õģ塣Ծ˼·ģһU
䌍(dng)ڴxP(gun)ӢhՓfĺ^^иu֘(bio)֮l(f)F(xin)ܶr_^ֻҪC3ҪܣһxעڶӑՓԒ}@Щеr²һƬ
(1)xעڴҳҊxУ^@ҊᆖʽxP(gun)I~ȵ@ЩfW(xu)Ҫ^ߣW(xu)Ҫ˼ᆖܱ^ǡ(dng);ҪȥY(ji)ͱb;ЩyĸxDZ^yεĸҶ֪x߀@ɡϷNN҂֮l(f)F(xin)rfDZ^W(xu)^֪rMıĉЩ˂_ɵďVR@ЩW(xu)̫yھ(x)m(dng)@˼
(2)ӑՓԒ}ķиԇ}Ŀl(f)˂˼xͬͬⳣ˶Ԟ҂ӑՓĆ}ŷǸ_܉sСӑՓ}ķ@οsСڽČЕwv̫sС@^ph^c
(3)ĩҪ_иПoNͬӑՓҪϤ@NӢı_ʽ_Լµ^cٱ_
2ZԱ_
иCόIntegratedWriting“ģ”֮@fµĿY(ji)(gu)һҪ@ôµĸ߷ֲ܃H{^(q)^(q)һܻģ܌F(xin)ھCόУȿܸҪ“(ni)”Լˮƽ“ZԱ_”
ڱ҂(c)ӑՓһиZԱ_עԼˮƽZԱ_ǽ쾚\ӢZZĻA(ch)ϵ@ﲻHҪ܉?q)_ľҪ܉Y(ji)挍ă(ni)\òͬʽ_@ֵķǽY(ji)һЩMзgӖ(xn)
ивäĿbӣֹF(xin)“”и(jng)еӣҪ_“Щ˶씳ͽ(jng)׃QƤwɫ”
͑(yng)ԓSomespecies tend to change colors of theirskins in order to hidefrom theirpredators. (_ʴ_There are some specieswhich tend tochange colors oftheir skins in order to hide from their predators.@ʹthere be {(dio)˴ijNǏ{(dio)淽ʽ)
3߷иĽY(ji)(gu)Ҫ
A.Unity-y(tng)һIJͬ^cCĿҪՓCͬһ^c(w)ںεòͬ_؏(f)ͬһ}ʽӲ“firstly”“secondly”۲ܱC¾unifiedҕ|(zh)ϵĽy(tng)һ
B.Progression-uMY(ji)ՓՓγɵģκֶLJ@}չ_м}֪
C.Coherence-P(gun)һԡǰ(yng)֮gȻ(lin)ϵģ¸֮g(yng)ԓǜȻһw
@Ҫ䌍DZ^ߵETSµwX㵽ˎׂ^cՓ^cOGеĸ߷ķԿʹՓֻ1lֻҪǰ(lin)ӵȻһһ(do)xY(ji)ՓǺ
eƪ“when young adults should leave their parents”䌍µֻ@һ^cMУ“x_漢p䌍˼ϲHҪrgȥW(xu)(x)ͳ䌍Լܸõ̎ϵď(f)s(zhn)”uJߺܺõ“develop”Լ^cʮͻՓܳ(Ƚ˞ʲô˼ϲ-21oԽԽֽ˞ʲôҪrgȥ䌍Լ
pҪֵ،W(xu)(x)Nļܸܲõ؞ԺM(zhn)ʂ…)^ɺȻ(һ“solivingindependently at an early age is not suitable for all young adults”Ȼ،Ԓ}Mһչ_)߀һЩ^Y^C(j)(an observation showsthatmany University graduated students are unemployed. Therefore they will not be…)
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ϾP(gun)߷и(x)IJּv⣬ϣͨ^ĽBܽoҵи俼ףҌW(xu)(x)иԇȡúóɿ!